As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
over the past few decades the living lives of human beings have changed dramatically. A quick reflection of a typical day of a person will surely convey how the rapid phase of life have affected the mankind. Everyone commute from home to work by a car, bus or train which comprises super power engine and many other control systems. it is hard to find a man who do not work with a computer with multiple CPU, GPU cores resulting very high computational power. even though family members are living far apart, wireless communication through orbitting satellites have allowed them to be always connected. On this ground it is seemingly plausible that the convenient environment have dissuaded the people from thinking for themselves.
However, it is not cogent to bridge the human relience on existing convenience of the advenced technology with their ability to think for themselves. Because, the technology has created numerous problems and issues for a modern man than the problems of the hypothetical human who do not have cars, mobile phones, computers and any other advanced equipment. For instance, conservation of energy and the global warming is a critical issue due to the extence use of the fossil fuels and deforrestation which was never imaginable to a person in 18th century. In contrast to the statement, contempory man thinks more and more on himself comprising the thought processes of usage of renewable energy sources, reduction of carbon dioxide emission, protecting the green coverage and so on.
Secondly, our farther dependancy on new technology has made us investigators in every filed as the avalibility of information through the internet. With the dense coverage of 4G and immerging 5G technology in wireless communication, the whole world has come to our finger tips and hence anybody is well informed about the weather, diseaces and medicine, politics, new inventions, arts and virtually everything. now, we are mindful whether to take an umbrella, a hat or sun cream with us and even pack the stuff and evacuate the area since we are always updated on the weather condition and natural disasters like tsunami, hurricanes. Moreover, more or less every patient have a comprehensible knowledge on their sickness before visiting a doctor with the avalibility of medical information in the internet and which has allowed people to care more about their physical and mental fitness.
On the other hand, the technological advancements over the past decades have become a motivational factor to involve in further innovations. Sir Alexnder Flemming found the antibiotic substance, Penisiline that can cure bactrial infections and which have lead to save huge number of lives in second wald war. The electric lamp which lights the whole world was a great achievement of Thomas Alwa Edison who have failed thousand times initially. now people know that the existing world is a result from past dedications of maverick thinkers and it will create hope for future humanity. now many things can be done which was never possible before.
The technological advencement will mark the human race from the discovery of fire to the invension of nanotechnology. At each step of way to the current highteh world it have never precluded the human ability to think for themselves but, created new pathways to explore and serve the mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2814.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 545.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16330275229 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8708437716 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 312.0 215.323595506 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57247706422 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 911.7 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4993340335 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9523809524 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219523761444 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586419473055 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588385350029 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123335550268 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666193407848 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.