Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do u agree or disagree?
Nowadays, several developing nations are being devastated by inevitable disasters. It is argued that developed countries should support poorer nations with compassionate aid during natural calamities. I completely agree with this statement because rich countries have all the resources needed and could build a stronger relationship with other nations.
Wealthy countries have more than enough money as well as supplies necessary to recover from imminent catastrophes. It is undeniable that natural disasters could lead to a large number of casualties and death if people are unprepared and the governments have no funds to support. With the help of first-world nations, miserable countries could be saved from this kind of crucial situations. In the Philippines, for instance, in 2013, a devastating typhoon in Tacloban City which killed at least 6,000 people and destroyed almost 90% of structure in the area awakened the sympathy of the U.S. government to improve resilience.
Additionally, assistance from rich nations to third-world countries in events of damaging circumstances could establish a better relationship. It is not only the poor countries that would be beneficial, but also the nations who supported could be advantageous in making outstanding business in the future. For example, again, the U.S. benefits from assisting the Philippines directly and indirectly. Their aid strengthens the relationship between them and it helps both countries through trade and investment.
In conclusion, because developed nations are capable of providing the essential aspects of rehabilitation during natural hazards, they should help less affluent countries with humanitarian assistance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...le that natural disasters could lead to a large number of casualties and death if people are unpr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, third, well, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85542168675 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16753686413 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0234916451 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302573723028 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10502279133 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927197152928 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19204930651 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956657208094 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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