The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all the shops in town and cities closing. Do you agree or dis agree?
In this contemporary era, the advancements in internet has changed the way we live and online shopping is one such advancement. Some people think that due to the increase in the purchase of goods by using online platform will eventually impact local vendors and may lead them to their closure. I believe that the number of people who buy online may increase exponentially but still the local vendors will have an edge over the online platforms.
On one hand, there are many developments in the e-commerce sector from the last few years, which impacted the way how consumers buy their goods. For example, Amazon, the number of individuals who are using this platform for buying their house hold items are increasing by every passing day. Additionally, these platforms are becoming very popular among the young adults who does not have time to go to a mall or local shops to buy their needs. Consecutively the price they offer when compared to the offline store is very attractive.
On the other hand, local vendors are very important for the society in order to improve the local communal economy. Apart from this the individuals prefer to buy some basic household items from these shops. For example, in case of buying vegetables, people generally prefer to buy from the local vendors as they can buy them by physical examination. What’s more, sometimes the online products may be damaged like clothes may be torn or may be a replica of the original brand as there is one to check their genuinity until it reaches the end consumer
In conclusion, Although there is a increase in the number of people using these online platforms, but still local vendors have their own significance. Thinking local shops will be effected due to the impact of online shopping is merely absurd.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, apart from, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93729372937 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6078831191 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521452145215 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0251564448 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120172230596 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05482445255 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626886161647 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944358501484 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058942563729 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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