Some people prefer to buy local products, while others prefer international products. What is your opinion on this?
In today’s era, people like to buy more things, but in this notion people have two different deliberation. Some people like to purchase domestic things, while other like to take foreign things. This essay will be elucidated on both sides before jumping into a final note.
First and foremost, many people like to purchase local things because they can easily buy from native markets, moreover any issue see in product they fix it rapidly and easily. Secondly, buying from local vendors means the product has less travel time from the factory to peoples’ home. All of the energy that is used to transport things via planes, trains, trucks, and ship contributes to global warming and generate unhealthy air quality. Furthermore, people buy local products they are actually promotes local wealth and jobs. To exemplify, recently the U.K government study on local brands, it was found production of any local product done by nearest (native) place so they increase many jobs as well as wealth.
On the other hand, transnational things have good quality and also available in diverse variety that’s a one reason for prefer this things. Additionally, many transnational brands are maintain our product and also services. For example, at recent time, foreign automobile company name is motor and gears, which recently launched a first new car ‘Hector’ in India they provide very well facilities and road side services at anywhere on 24/7.
According to my opinion, most of people like to buy local products compare to transnational things, while international product is also important for variety and quality but it is very costly compare to native things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27881040892 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74635407728 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8758701809 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202180371031 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771846677026 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568144901324 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119744314067 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383041181881 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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