working four days a week
Both the lecture and the reasing are about working four days a week instead of five days. The author of the reading feels that implementing such a policy has social impact alongside economical beneficious. the lecture challenges the claims made by the author. he is of the opinion that such an approach not only have beneficion but also will harm both the economy notions and indivisual incentive for working.
To begin with, the author argues by working less would result in less errors in a production line since workers might have more time to rest an relax, and companies will increase their margin in this manner. this specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims that providing enough workers to fulfill the required forces, companies would need to hire more labor so more budget is needed to provide training and health benefites for additional employees. hiring more force labor also means more space is needed and all these extra efforts are costly for companies.
secondly, the author suggest, the unemplyment rate would decreas. it is said that the twoenty percent less working means twoenty percent working hours vacancies and an uportunity for those who dont have a job; however, the lecturer rebuts this by mentioning that companies might not accept new forces because of the reasons mentioned before so there will be no more employment and as a result the unemployment rate would not change.
finally the author posits that those who are not married would have more times to spend time with their familly. in contrast the lecturer's position is that the policy would cause risk. the workers might not have jobs tability because in times of economical collapses these are the first to get fired. on the other hand, they would have less merit in their job since companies prefere to select those who are more available. thus, they are less likley to recieve a promotion. Never are they likely to receive a promotion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
...mpact alongside economical beneficious. the lecture challenges the claims made by t...
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Suggestion: He
...allenges the claims made by the author. he is of the opinion that such an approach...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun errors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... argues by working less would result in less errors in a production line since worke...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ce workers might have more time to rest an relax, and companies will increase thei...
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...ce workers might have more time to rest an relax, and companies will increase their marg...
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...l increase their margin in this manner. this specific argument is challenged by the ...
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Suggestion: He
...argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims that providing enough workers to...
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...lth benefites for additional employees. hiring more force labor also means more space ...
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...tra efforts are costly for companies. secondly, the author suggest, the unemplyment ra...
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...st, the unemplyment rate would decreas. it is said that the twoenty percent less w...
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Suggestion: don't
...cancies and an uportunity for those who dont have a job; however, the lecturer rebut...
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...e unemployment rate would not change. finally the author posits that those who are no...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: finally,
...e unemployment rate would not change. finally the author posits that those who are no...
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...times to spend time with their familly. in contrast the lecturers position is that...
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Suggestion: contrast,
...es to spend time with their familly. in contrast the lecturers position is that the poli...
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...on is that the policy would cause risk. the workers might not have jobs tability be...
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...apses these are the first to get fired. on the other hand, they would have less me...
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Suggestion: Thus
...to select those who are more available. thus, they are less likley to recieve a prom...
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Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: Are Never
...are less likley to recieve a promotion. Never are they likely to receive a promotion.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96941896024 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40572703391 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538226299694 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8212847554 49.2860985944 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5625 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104524874159 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374939545065 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11461993503 0.0662205650399 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733428558674 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767827385846 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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