Agree or disagree? The rules that society today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
It goes without saying that from ancient times until the modern contemporary time of ours, human beings were preoccupied with setting rules and regulations in order to control their community. Rules are an imperative, indispensable part of every developed society. In this respect, while some people believe that nowadays, rules are very strict for younger generation to follow, other people stand on the other side of the continuum, holding the opinion that today's rules are not strict for young people to obey. As far as I am concerned, I assume that policy and rule are necessary and the existing rules for youth are everything but strict. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, policy makers adopt rules and regulation on the basis of their community's cultural and moral values which are not strict at all. It is crystal clear that each society enjoys from assortments of moral and cultural values which are inseparable and a good indicator of a society's background. Having considered all of these values, policy makers and practitioners devise sets of rules that fit well with these issues. Undeniably, setting the rules according to a community's moral and cultural value does not mean that rules are strict for the youths to obey. To put it in a more vivid picture, in Iranian context, the people of which are Muslim, drinking beverages like wine is forbidden for people because of our religious background and the moral obligations we have pertaining to that background. The majority of people are thoroughly aware of this rule and respect the rule as well. Is someone is caught drinking the illegal beverages, government fine them because of violating the rules. While some young people oppose this rules and consider it strict and limiting, the majority of people are proponents of this rule since it is related to our moral and religious background.
Furthermore, rules are an inseparable part of controlling and managing a society, the absence of which will lead to a chaotic, haphazard, underdeveloped country. It is no secret to anyone that rules set the border and limit for people living in a community or country. Not only do the rules will lead to a better flourished society, but they also make the country enjoy a better disciplined people. In this line of thought, when there is no rules, strict or easy, people will become out of control and each of them may take measures according to their personal wants and desire. Undoubtedly, under such a circumstance, a community will collapse and will become chaotic. An example can drive this very notion home. Many people consider the driving rules too strict, especially for younger people aged 18. In Uganda, for instance, the youth could get their driver license as soon as they are ten years old. As a result, the rate of accident, mortality, and misbehavior increased drastically. Policy makers set some reasonable rules and regulations in order to prevent any progression of chattiness in their country. Having changed the rules, people revealed their discontent and protest heavily. However, the majority of people considered the newly assigned rule as a necessary part of constitution of the society, especially for young people. The more rules a society have, the more prosperous and developed it may become.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I presume that rules of today's society are not strict for young people. Rules are designed according to the cultural, moral, and religious background of a society which are vital and essential. Moreover, the absence of rules will turn a country into a chaotic place which is hard to withstand.
- Agree or disagree? The rules that society today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decision for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no rules'?
Suggestion: there are no rules
...d people. In this line of thought, when there is no rules, strict or easy, people will become out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3103.0 1977.66487455 157% => OK
No of words: 609.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96768813016 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75684711147 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459770114943 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1000.8 618.680645161 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4252123285 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13793103448 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312314384618 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08521657719 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823166079518 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216219050552 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348647169748 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 86.8835125448 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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