In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities, some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Urban centres have been known to have a fairer share of social amenities such as good learning centres and hospitals. Most people believe that educators and health care workers should compulsorily work in rural areas for sometime while others believe otherwise citing that everyone has the right to work wherever they choose which i strongly support.
Those who think education and health professionals should spend some years of their career in villages think that this move will enable rural dwellers have a taste of the excellent services city dwellers enjoy. When these workers spend time in the countryside, they will bring their expertise to bear which the inhabitants would not have been able to access if the workers were in the metropolis. This will lead to a more educated and healthier sub-urban population. For instance, Afuze, a suburb of Benin city has recorded a decrease in death rate since the government made it mandatory for young health and education graduates to spend the first five years of their post graduation in rural areas.
In a democratic society however, i believe people have the right to practice their careers wherever they consider fit. Instead of limiting where people can work, the government should make rural areas attractive. They can do this by building state of the art facilities and offer incentives to people willing to set up there. For example, rural areas in Canada have witness an upsurge immigration of professionals because the government provided adequate facilities for its dwellers including free medical and educational coverage.
In conclusion, though some opine that medical and educational personnel should be made to work in rural areas so its dwellers can benefit from their knowledge, I support others who believe that people have the right to practice their chosen career wherever they want. Moreso, if the authorities made rural areas attractive, people will voluntarily migrate there to work and to stay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23028391167 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62304688605 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539432176656 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9033650398 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266319514542 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102450325613 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804102643503 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17984750657 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510890283892 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.