An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• offer to find somewhere to stay
• give advice about what to do
• give information about what clothes to bring
Dear Chris,
I was absolutely delighted to hear that you are able to finally come to Iran and visit shiraz in May. Summer is a great but hot time to visit shiraz because there weather is going to be warmer and the days are longer. so make sure that you bring all equipments for getting tan and try to put on light clothes.
I hope that you will spend a couple of days living with us but I also recommend spending some night in a hotel in the centre of town which is named Karim Khan so you can experience an old-fashion home that is designed with many colourful glasses and it's architecture brings you a vast historical knowledge of our previous century. beside that this hotel is near to many galleries and park so you can try them in your leisure time.
I highly recommend to visit Perspolis, an ancient palace which is located in Izad shahr. While you are there you should also meet a guide to show the path of pasargard to you. pasargard is King Kourosh palace.
I will be working during the week you are coming but on the weekend I hope that you will consent to join us on for visiting Hafez tombs. It seems you will really be thrilled of there as I know you are a fan of him.
We can't wait until you arrive,
Your friend,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...g to be warmer and the days are longer. so make sure that you bring all equipments...
^^
Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beside
...ical knowledge of our previous century. beside that this hotel is near to many galleri...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend visiting'.
Suggestion: recommend visiting
...y them in your leisure time. I highly recommend to visit Perspolis, an ancient palace which is l...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... palace which is located in Izad shahr. While you are there you should also meet a gu...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pasargard
...e to show the path of pasargard to you. pasargard is King Kourosh palace. I will be wor...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re as I know you are a fan of him. We cant wait until you arrive, Your friend, ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, may, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28691983122 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23104233354 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1428150585 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3636363636 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0617504317935 0.216113520407 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279637994444 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391327894511 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0201434313001 0.12726935374 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183365197072 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.