Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
On the one hand, some believe that people should live for a 100 years or even more than that as it will help them to stay with their loved ones for an extended period of time . As there will be fewer deaths, the world will be a better place to live in with no sorrows and sadness over the death of the near ones. Moreover, the life span of intelligent and genius people can be extended which will help the world get more knowledgeable people and they can offer their guidance through their experiences of life to the upcoming generations.
However, the aforementioned benefits are negligible when we consider the downsides of living forever. To start with, after people reach the age of 75 or 80 they have hardly anything left to do or experience. This will make their lives monotonous. In addition, this trend will lead to population explosion and will be detrimental to already existing global problems like food shortage, pollution and global warming, water crisis, accommodation issues and traffic congestion to mention some. The world resources will be depleted at a much faster rate with more people simultaneously consuming them. Another aspect to this is that with more proportion of population in elderly group the government will need to invest more for social benefits of old people and this will affect the economy of the nation.
To conclude, people may vary in their opinion, but I think that science should not go against the law of nature and extend the lifespan of humans as it will worsen the economy and environment of the world.
- You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule. 61
- Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule. 73
- You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule. 73
- You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...y with their loved ones for an extended period of time . As there will be fewer deaths, the wo...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oved ones for an extended period of time . As there will be fewer deaths, the worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8202247191 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60962317263 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0080153631 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.7 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192098094871 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856582420136 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520760493375 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127966640073 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024829277791 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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