Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
From last two to three decade, international tourism has become eminent among people who passionate about travelling. Presently, industry is taking advantages of it and making biggest market all over the world.Due to some communication and cultural gap among people from various corner of the world, travel industries are increasing tension instead of understanding them well. This essay will describe few valuable points in order to support my opinion.
In my opinion, international tourism industry must have the capability to understand their client form a variety of cultures resulting in tension between folks. Firstly, when a person or group of people are seeking for assistance in order to get countless information about a location, agent must identify their basic requirements to provide them complete service such as they must have broad idea of their personal standpoints. they should priorities the personal specification. Along with that, agent is responsible to take care of money exchange and visa smoothly rather than keep them in headache.
travel-agent must be taking care of food habit, accommodation, amenities and traveling preference before making final booking. what kind of food is available in particular hotel, are they interested to stay in hotel or apartment or resort or in hostel to spend less money, what are the benefits they are looking for during their holidays, are they willing to avail local transportation or they want a personal car to avoid crowd.These are the basic details to create transparency between client and agent so that they can feel relax rather than feel fear before travelling.For example, websites like goibibo or cleartrips delivers the clear view of every details.
In conclusion, in detailed information always expected from international industry which provides confidence to people whic are planning to explore unknown locations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57534246575 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96704826364 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63698630137 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.563056269 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.8 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225753185809 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087279929177 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744257596561 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136541513252 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663573374869 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.