Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The depicted maps enumerate some proposed changes carried out in Paradise Island.
Overall, it is evident that Paradise Island was completely transformed with the establishment of various developmental infrastructure. However, Pier wasn't altered.
To initiate, the Island was completely least developed in the past with few trees in the center of the Island and Scientific Research Station in the western region of Paradise Island. In contrast, the Island witnessed a dramatic change in recent days. Trees were cut down and open restaurant has been built in the center of the Island.
Furthermore, the most obvious trend had seen in Scientific Research Station, as it had been removed and the hotel complex with Swimming pool has established. In addition, the cycle path is constructed at the edge of the sea. Similarly, cafe and scenic lookout are constructed in the eastern and northeast region of Island, simultaneously. Lastly, the pier was renovated and extended in size. Similarly, the boat was replaced by Cruise ship.
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- Writing task 1 11
- The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualification in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers. 78
- The diagram below shows the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. 67
- The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentages of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. 61
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...lopmental infrastructure. However, Pier wasnt altered. To initiate, the Island w...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, similarly, so, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98033104098 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5598344264 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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