Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Nowadays the idea of women must take full responsibility to their children is widely debated. However, I personally do not entirely accept this statement and I will explain why in this essay.
First and foremost, we must consider the struggle of mothers in bearing their children even risk her own life just to save someone's life. Thus, true father should help and play big role to growing up their baby. The role of both mother and father should on the same level whether educating, financing, taking care and raising their children.
Furthermore, the men are not only donate their sperm then women must stay at home being house wife and prepare all the necessities. Nonetheless, share parenting is the most important to bring the children up. They must hand in hand to build their children become the better person in the future.
To sum up, it seems to me that share parenting play the main role in today's world. As we life in the modern era where the existence of gender equality must not be ignored because men and women have a some role to educate and build an intelligence generation in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77835051546 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45350536906 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644329896907 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7995689628 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135886218098 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568085010806 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473742963509 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083867629271 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352076540444 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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