Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone.
Since we were little, our parents often taught us to think twice before we make any decisions. However, as we grow up there are piles of different kind of decisions no matter it is the minor or the important one are coming for us to make. At this time, it might be more important to think twice also ask friends , families or people around us for some advice, though it sounds like not independent or mature enough to make decisions on our own. In my opinion, I agree that one should never make an important decision alone. Below I will list some reasons to support my stance.
Firstly, it might sound somewhat childish or dependent for most people to some extent when they first hear of that some people can't make a decision on their own, because most people consider this kind of behavior should not have existed as we grow up. However, I think sometimes it is beneficial for ourselves also for those people who give us advice that we can grow up together or learn some new things while communicating with other people.
Secondly, if one makes the decision alone might sometimes under a rush or impulsive situation, on the flip side, if we make the decision before consulting other people’s opinion, it is more likely that we prevent some negative effect from making decisions.
In short, I think it will definitely be a wise idea to make decisions before asking someone else, because there is always someone in our life who has more experience dealing with the similar situation, can indeed prevent us from doing wrong things.
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- TPO-40 - Integrated Writing Task 88
- TPO 41 Integrated essay 85
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People learn things better from those at their own level, such as fellow students or co-workers, than from those at a higher level,such as teachers or supervisors. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. 76
- Do you agree or disagree that it is important to increase the time primary school students spend on technologies such as computers through reducing the time taken up by art and music courses? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mportant to think twice also ask friends , families or people around us for some a...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hen they first hear of that some people cant make a decision on their own, because m...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'think'.
Suggestion: sometimes think
... have existed as we grow up. However, I think sometimes it is beneficial for ourselves also for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in short, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71481481481 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44148859222 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6303551313 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.444444444 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.45110844103 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199451091093 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108033244204 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129363721226 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121318369634 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582996018899 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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