It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some, on the one hand, cite that certain people take advantage of having a natural ability which can lead to mastering profession effortlessly, while many are strongly opposed to such this notion arguing that “all people” have the potential to become an expert by being exposed to a great education system. This essay will consider both sides and give a concluding view.
Those who support the idea of “the gifted child” cite that they can easily achieve personal or professional goals by making use of their talent. Examples can be seen in people who have a gift for music or languages even when they are very young. In addition, the abilities and talents that children inherit from their parents can pave the ground to reach at the top of their profession.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that this does not hold true for everyone. There are people who never get a chance to discover their natural ability or even if they could find out, they don’t know how to put it to use. Thus, they need some experts in their professional fields who teach and push them down to the right route. Another argument is acquiring a technical knowledge, especially in today’s knowledge-based world, which has a crucial role to reveal talents through the learning process. Finally, it should be noted that it is more the matter of being exposed to a good educational context to have the opportunity for professional development.
Overall, it is logical to conclude that all people are likely to be successful in some fields by showing interest in some areas and continuing to develop their specific skills to the point that they reach their goals. This effort seems to be more important than exclusively rely on our genetic characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, thus, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99663299663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75188215183 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7341024296 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153715928599 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582967159232 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422390046765 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957241545186 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169622073065 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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