Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.In your letter, you should tell:– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased– what you will do if it is increased.

Essay topics:

Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.

In your letter, you should tell:

– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased

– what you will do if it is increased.

Dear Mr John,

I am Ell Green and residing in one of your rented apartments. My apartment address is 749, Woodside Avenue. I am writing in response to your letter in which you have informed about the increment in monthly rent from Rs. 10000 to Rs.12000.

With regards to the rent increase, I would like to take a reference from the signed rental agreement, where we have agreed on a fixed monthly rent of Rs. 10000 for one year commencing from June 1, 2019, to May 31, 2019. I have been staying in this apartment for only 3 months as your tenant and always paid rent on time. Moreover, the rent I am paying is already on the higher side and excluding the maintenance cost. Therefore, I feel that it would be inappropriate to increase the rent in such a short span and would be against the agreement.

I hope that a generous person like you would understand my genuine concern and reconsider your plan of rent revision. In case, you still feel the need to revise the rent then I am sorry to inform you that I would be forced to take legal action against you for violating the contract signed between us.

I anticipate cooperation from you on this matter.

Yours sincerely,

Ell Green

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52161013267 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3144280492 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306074345822 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118506209273 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066190826743 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180999781514 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672971063643 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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