The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of globalization become the world smaller, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The significant influence of different cultures might disappear as a result of this globalization, has sparked the controversy over this trend on people dread''s culture will suffer a disappeared in recent years. Therefore, this essay will elaborate how is possible to agree with this fact and how a complete vision of this trend may disagree and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the inevitably change of culture will impact in decrease places to smaller while the globalization roughly increase, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it will improve the relationship with each other. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has show that 87% of places are in agreement with globalization. Nonetheless, places are reducing and mitigating their space.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks that might overwhelm the significant influence a high disagree for other hand, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that other countries could be populated and help to increase the globalization in remote areas. For instance, Australia has more land non populated than people to live in the countryside. Hence, it would be a fantatisc way to move huge industries and numerous centers of distributions to there.
According to what has been exposed above, it can be concluded that there are many ways to solve this problem are distinguished, although a better diplomacy among all nations should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07911036141 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2534475676 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.6 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261641815109 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825231825848 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682778187166 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121563845786 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093793359201 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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