The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Globalization is the process which integrating various culture in society, due to increases it have some positive and negative result. Sometimes the mostly the native people get fear of globalization because of cultural changes.
Firstly, the benefits of widespread people which use many purpose like trading, transportation, education, technology development and understanding the culture of other community etc. According to this it developed the national economic growth and goods and services including. For example, Canada doing more migration than other countries but still there is no impact on culture.
Nevertheless, the people who feel discomfort of implementing globalization in their country, they are still underdeveloped in technology, education, and other activity also. Although, in some place racism is started to increases between to different communities which become a war. For instance, the country Burma is backward because they fear about the cultural changes so they don’t allow another community people inside them.
In conclusion, the essay shows above in two different aspect of globalization. The great Indian poet Mr.Vivakandhar said a quote “The culture which grow by only teaching to others not dumping in to themself”. In my view, the spreading of globalization is good which have more positive aspect, it let's make all unity and peace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...culture in society, due to increases it have some positive and negative result. Some...
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Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the mostly the'. Did you mean 'mostly the'?
Suggestion: mostly the
...positive and negative result. Sometimes the mostly the native people get fear of globalization...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...chnology, education, and other activity also. Although, in some place racism is star...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'increase'.
Suggestion: increase
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'aspect' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'aspects'.
Suggestion: aspects
... the essay shows above in two different aspect of globalization. The great Indian poet...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Vivakandhar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72946859903 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19091542281 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661835748792 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7424207368 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145154735198 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535169298222 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404052657813 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877100943315 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458564097448 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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