The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the negative impact on nations cultural because of the globalization can lead to thought-provoking discussions. my opinion is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I disagree with that cultural may be destroyed and vanished due to the globalization high trend.
there are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, globalization is a fact and should be accepted by all countries due to the high development, and each country can direct it on its own cultural benefit. it is important to note that because of some countries where in Egypt spread their cultural abroad by using the globalization, their cultural are now more known to different far countries. Therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that the fear of globalization to destroy country`s cultural is not considerable.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that more understanding to the country culture is given by the globalization. First and foremost, many people do not afford to travel to several countries, and they use the current social networks to connect with such to know more about other inherited cultures worldwide. When you put into the search bar on google any question about any country, it gives you detailed and supported information. This exemplifies that globalization enhances the connection and promotes the information about each country.
I see that there is equally evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that the fear does not exist and should be eliminated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27547169811 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22078069205 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6696727409 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137623613418 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475997985514 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387241595679 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715165590572 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413717980033 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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