The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A society is a group of people living together and striving for a common cause. The prompt claim that living condition of the society is enhanced when the people in society question the ways in which they are being governed. questioning the authority bring more accountability of the government, and prevent those in power from taking any action that can have negative consequences. moreover, it makes government more productive. therefore, I believe with the prompt that the society achieves more through the accountability of those in power.
To begin with, this causes more the public department from engaging in corruption through the system of accountability. For example, if the Mayor of a city has to publish financial report of all the spending every year on city infrastructure making people aware of how money from their taxes are used on different area, then it will made hard for the those in municipal department to involve in corruption and illegal allocation of funds. therefore, when public closely monitor the activities of those in authority, those in power become more answerable for all the spending through accountability, and this prevent the department from involving in corrupt activities. Hence, public funds are used in the correct way.
moreover, since the policies of government directly affects the general population, questioning the authority will make the government retract any decision that people find offensive. For example, last year government of Pakistan, in order to widen the tax net, increased taxes on various good, this caused a significant rise in inflation. However, due to public protests against the unreasonable taxes imposed the government has to reverse the taxes on various good. this example shows that how by asking the government of their actions, public can make the government to stop taking action that have negative consequences on the common man.
Furthermore, its increase the productivity of the government through sense of competition. when authority knows that their actions are closely being monitored by the public, they try to win the trust of people by improving their performance. this causes each government to do most in their term. During elections people’s decision is based on the performance of political parties. therefore the sense of competition causes the political parties to do more government projects and serve to the public demand in order to win their trust. All this has positive impact on the society in term of improved condition of people.
In summary, when people question authority the condition people are improved significantly. it bring accountability and prevent the official from engaging in corruption, it allows the people to gives their opinion of government matter and make the government revoke any bad decision that hurt the public. moreover, it increase productivity through competition. Such characteristics that come through the public concern regarding the government actions have beneficial effect on the lives of people of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2588.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42557651992 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98417492512 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446540880503 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.0 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2225867022 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.52173913 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116038550536 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406482756395 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498375369168 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745201689605 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479896643789 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.