A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
I agree with the author's statement that all the students should have the same curriculum before they enter college primarily because this proposal serves a dual purpose, it reduces the current complexity which a country faces from designing of the curriculum to managing the end results and it also helps students by establishing a common merit scale on which students can analyze their performance as well as encourage knowledge sharing among students of any school in any other state.
First, Same national curriculum brings a standard ranking system which is not only comparatively easy to manage for a nation but it'll be effective as well. For instance, there will be approx 10 lakh students in a particular standard in India, if we consider the seperate curriculum, there will be seperate study material, notes and various sets of examination papers which are to be evaluated. This activity consumes a lot of time & is prone to errors. Another advantage that we get is there will be a common merit system which will act as a straight forward criteria for college admissions. This argument in some cases will be act against a batch of students who are very clear about what field they want to get into and for the same they want to take some additional electives & get an edge for college admissions.
Secondly, common national curriculum also provides a better benchmark for the students to learn. Along with benchmark, it develops an etiquette of knowledge sharing among the students. For example, if there are 20 students in a school following a particular unique curriculum , the benchmark student for the notes or any sort of explaination will be the topper among these 20 students. On the other side, if there are 2 lakh students studying the same curriculum and using social media for sharing of materials is trending, students get better benchmarks and an opportunity to connect across the nation with other students which results in comraderie.
Third, this proposal brings the ease for national employment schemes as well, teachers can switch to schools across the country and give their 100 % to the students. their can be internal job postings via which teachers can switch jobs.
Concluding, i acknowledge the fact that this will have disadvantage for the students who have their interest defined and want to get focussed to specific subjects from the beginning and nation will not provide that flexibility but here advantages of having common curriculum are more and definitely weigh more than the cons mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example, for instance, sort of, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08153477218 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72229752188 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498800959233 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.395384113 60.3974514979 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0769230769 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238658040293 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891393963476 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787529448878 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130425159886 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617694497101 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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