Question: An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
online shopping plays a vital role in modern life. Many believe that it helps make buying a product easier. however some conted that it has potential consequences on its own way. The present essay aims to discuss that the advantages of Internet shopping excel its disadvantages.
Its generally admitted that online shopping is beneficial for two main reasons. for one thing, consumers have more access to examine their intended products. For instance, via web servers consumers can check related sites with competitive prices. Another thing is that it Provides people a suitable source to send gifts more quickly. As an illustration, they can search and purchase gifts among websites sellers.
By contrast, there are several disadvantages to online buying. In the first place, it raises serious questions about security. An example might help clarify the point. some unsecured websites can easily access through payment information and they are not safe. In the second place, there are delivery problems. All in all, in some cases we have delayed delivery or the product is not what we expected.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative aspects of buying sites, I personally think that its upside is significantly more productive than its downside. To support my position I would like to present two basic argument. Firstly professor Smith the head of the economy Department at queens land university asserts that nowadays, consumers and companies Carry on active business life with these online platforms. For example a modern trade called business to business (B2B) satisfied them with their own needs. Secondly the latest figures released by World trade Organization (wto) reflect that about 71 percent of buyers can buy with discount. In other words, web stores offer them pre-selling products with lower cost.
in conclusion, it can be a stated that online shopping is necessary. however, the question is: can online services improve the requirements and expectations of human beings in general? only time will tell but in the meantime, online shopping will continue to influence every aspect of everyday life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, another thing, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, for one thing, in other words, in some cases, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32544378698 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69466864424 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8819188676 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200270340237 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481305462666 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033208575463 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100925986434 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247561800315 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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