An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
In this money oriented world, a good deal of scientific discoveries and technologies have been carried out by some highly potential scientists that has brought a very enormous change in our life. in this digital Epoch, the trend of shopping has been dramatically changed among the people. Many of them have become online purchaser. It is so convenient as well as affordable for customers however this trend of online shopping is being continuously broken small traders's business on the very large scale
First of all, owing to high advancement in science and technology. A fair amount of people have become shopaholic with the assistance of online websites and social applications like Amazon, Fliptkcart, Snapdeal, Alibaba and so on. This is a good way to do shopping on line for those people who are associated with their professions On the flip side, many small business entrepreneurs have been continuously losing their supremacy over their trading sector that is a red signal for their employment security so some prominent steps should be well taken to preserve them in the market with strong domination by government's support and public awareness otherwise many severe causes we all may have to suffer painfully
Secondly, in my point of view, betterment with modern concept has to be done with a view to facilitate to growing numbers of people but this is kind of development must not be done at the cost of losing our traditional business cultural environment otherwise excessive amount of financial revenue will go to foreign countries from our country that would unquestionably arise many incurable hurdles for survival of our small business men along with common people
There should be well balance between online shopping and offline shopping. Because it would be great for both business men who do online and offline business
Thirdly, I strongly agree with small traders's contribution in the market. Because they sell their products with good quality and service but customers can get a benefit of discount offers like super market and big shopping malls. If products are found damaged or aweful quality it can be easily exchanged which cannot be easily exchanged in big super market or shopping mall
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13535911602 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73222854095 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566298342541 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 279.575471822 49.4020404114 566% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.555555556 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.2222222222 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112529635361 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493521124877 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024798877464 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687042707145 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254048365285 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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