To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether to study the major cities for a better understanding of the characteristics of society. Indisputably, one must know something about the surroundings of the area where society leaves. Nevertheless, it’s not necessary to know the cities because society may have different origins. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that studying the major cities of society, and would argue that to understand the important characteristics of a society, one may not study its major cities.
First of all, in past days major cities of the countries have their origins. I would like to point out that in this modern world the major cities are a mixture of all cultures, traditions, and styles. To illustrate, let us look at the example of great city Dubai. It belongs to Arabs of Saudi Arabia with their customs and traditions but, now its center of entrainment for all kinds of lavish people. In this circumstance, this major city has many different traditions and cultures. Consequently, it doesn’t reflect its characteristics.
Furthermore, when we consider France the fashion world, Paris is the main city of attraction and people of different societies come and establish themselves. Specifically, people from the fashion world like designers, models have come from different parts of the world have roots of different societies even they are settled in Paris. Both in France and Saudi Arabia, the major cities have common sense that they are modernized with different races of people living there. But, the villages and towns of these countries will have the true essence and value of tradition and origins of their ancestors. Hence, all the evidence above demonstrates that a major city is not so useful to study society in this modern era.
Admittedly, the study of major cities is important to know the origins. This is true only in olden days as for now everything has been changed, all of the major cities in the world look alike and have the same culture. Also, as the world is globalized everything is common so it is the easiest to communicate with others. However, the above argument does not constitute sufficient support to claim that the study of major cities is likely to be used for understanding it.
In conclusion, although analyzing the major cities we cannot completely know about society. As long as some considerations are taken, or some areas are involved, we can evaluate the features of a society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, as for, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1075794621 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89971839324 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476772616137 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0400286018 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4761904762 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259869755485 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860496581621 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126903697989 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163352176222 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155468604103 0.0667264976115 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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