The charts below show the reason why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart above illustrates the proportion of numerous reasons why people choose cycling or driving to work.
In general, it can be clearly seen from the chart that the most popular reason why people cycle to their office is on account of improving their health and lessening reducing the amount of pollution. Another interesting point is that most people decide to use their cars to work as this brings to them comfort.
In terms of cycling, it is easy to see that the proportion of people who choose cycling in order to take care of their fitness is as same as the proportion of the ones who are aware of saving the environment, with a percentage of 30%. Besides, there are some other factors that people consider when cycling: no related-parking dilemmas, no exorbitant fees, and higher speed. These factors are comparatively lower in percentage than the two mentioned factors, with 15%, 13%, and 12% respectively.
In contrast to this, there are also multiple reasons that determine people’s choices. Among them, the highest percentage of driving choices belongs to its satisfaction comfort nature with 40%, compared to 21% of the related-distance factor. While the number of people think that driving is faster than cycling and their need of bringing office supplies along to work has the same proportion, there is merely a little agreeing that driving is safer than cycling, which occupies 11% of all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The pie chart above illustrates the proportion of num...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cycle'.
Suggestion: to cycle
...n of numerous reasons why people choose cycling or driving to work. In general, it...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cycle'.
Suggestion: to cycle
...hat the proportion of people who choose cycling in order to take care of their fitness ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, while, in contrast, in general, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08050847458 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7647777448 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9659243195 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.222222222 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130890519644 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619625095197 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573817773507 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101307351356 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618487009629 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.