Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some hobbies are easy while others present more of a challenge. I personally believe both types of hobbies are fun. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that hobbies have to be challenging to be enjoyable.
On one hand, simple hobbies are enjoyable for many reasons. First, it is easy for us to make friends if we enjoy simple hobbies. Activities such as watching football games are generally loved many people. We often connect with strangers by talking about our favorite teams and sharing our views on the new players. The increased chance of developing friendships is a great benefit that such hobbies can bring. Secondly, in an increasingly complex society, the general public yearns or simplicity. Most people’s lives are already challenging with bills, rents, healthcare, and education to worry about. After a busy day of work, watching a funny TV shows and not thinking about anything can be a good pastime.
On the other hand, challenging hobbies are exciting too. One reason is that people can gain great sense of satisfaction if they were able to accomplish the challenge. For example, mountain climbing put both the body and mind of climbers into test, since one has to manage the breath and overcome the fear of falling. The views from the top and the sense of overcoming the impossible is what makes mountain climbing charming. Another challenging hobby is chess. Players sometimes need to predict their opponents moves hundreds of steps ahead. It is truly sensational when you can forecasted very move and your opponent plays right into your hand.
In conclusion, simple hobbies are fun and relaxing and difficult hobbies can be equally pleasurable for different reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...in an increasingly complex society, the general public yearns or simplicity. Most people'...
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Line 9, column 581, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'forecast'
Suggestion: forecast
...d. It is truly sensational when you can forecasted very move and your opponent plays right...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1654676259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72528250701 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6022400633 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5789473684 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22676369064 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620642011225 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776078949807 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163201534534 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104125572795 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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