You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir,
I am Donald Trump and was one of the passengers in a bus tour organised by your company on 22 January, 2019. I was in Bus No. 9 travelling from Berlin to Paris. I am writing this letter to complain you about the pathetic service in that trip. The trip was nightmare primarily because of bad behaviour of the bus driver.
In that trip, my friend Mr. Raunak requested for a bottle of water which were complimentary but driver refused to give them. He was a loud mouth, angry man and without any reason, shouted at the fellow passenger. Thereafter, once all the travellers spoke in support of the Raunak, the driver sped the bus and did not even give way for ambulance coming from behiend.
I hope you will impart the necessary training to your staffs and strictly warn them about the consequences if rules are not followed on the road. If you need any other information or clarification, I would provide it to you.
Yours faithfully,
Sadak Madak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'January 2019'.
Suggestion: January 2019
...us tour organised by your company on 22 January, 2019. I was in Bus No. 9 travelling from Ber...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... No. 9 travelling from Berlin to Paris. I am writing this letter to complain you ...
^
Line 19, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. Yours faithfully, Sadak Madak
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68604651163 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63347706659 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8359617296 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271278825472 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100741017936 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472897127876 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162976808232 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860286347696 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.