You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.
In your letter, you should:
give details of book
say why you need this book
tell how you will pay for it.
Dear sir/ madam,
I am writing to ask you for a favor. I am interested in buying a book from your bookstore. Can you ship it to my address as I reside in a different city than yours?
Let me explain in detail. From the past couple of months, I have been looking for a complete set of the book “Chronicles of Narnia” written by C.S.Weiss. After my constant search through my websites, I came to know that your bookstore has the first edition of the book signed by the author.
The book is a great read. The writer’s vision simply takes you on a ride to explore the magical land of Narnia. When I read it, I was completely mesmerized by the beauty of its writing. That’s why I want my niece to have it and it’s her 12th birthday next month. It would give me enormous joy if she could have the book on her special day.
I would really appreciate it if you could send me the complete set by this week, as I have to ship it further to my sister’s house. You can send me your account details along with e-bill and courier details, so that I can make the payment through net banking if you accept that, otherwise let me know the proper channel.
I will look forward to your response.
Thanks in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Rohit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Weiss
...ronicles of Narnia' written by C.S.Weiss. After my constant search through my we...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ition of the book signed by the author. The book is a great read. The writer&apo...
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Line 25, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in advance. Yours faithfully, Rohit
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51072961373 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64537185038 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3599379006 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6875 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256430675556 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077089124306 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626410749902 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142981257442 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838903143117 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.