You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology.
In your letter, you should:
• apology to your friend
• explain why you couldn’t attend the party
• say what steps you will take to avoid in future.
Dear Jimmy,
I’m really sorry for not being able to attend the birthday party since I was out of town. However, I assure you that this will not happen again.
First of all, I express my apology to you because I could’t attend the party. Although I was not present in the party, I wish you the best out of the best on that important day of your life. After knowing about the reason of my absence, I’m hoping that you’ll accept my apology
Actually, on that day my sister invited me to a family get together which she arranged at her farm house. Even though you sent me invitation via mail, I could’t receive it personally due to being out of town on that day. When I got back home from the farm house, then I checked the mail box and found out about the party. I felt sorry for forgetting your birthday date.
Ever since I realized my mistake, I’ m feeling apologetic. I’ve decided that I would keep a diary wherein I’ll write down birthday dates of all my friends so that I could keep the track of upcoming parties. I assure you that this’s not going to happen again.
Please, accept my apology.
Love,
Johny.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oping that you'll accept my apology Actually, on that day my sister invited ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, really, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65550239234 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42618175598 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607655502392 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9494519907 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282757714806 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101494345913 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675361394619 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154077344896 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876565983123 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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