Nowadays, many movies or films are based on books. Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie, other prefer to watch the movie before reading the book. Which one do you prefer?
In the modern era, a movie has played a prominent role in all societies. Because it is of paramount importance, most people have always sought ways to enhance the enjoyment of films. Some people may hold the view that reading books before seeing a film has many advantageous points. However, some others may take the opposite viewpoint and believe that watching a film before reading a book is better the first one. I content that seeing a movie without reading a book brings several positive points for viewers. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first important factor to be mentioned is that watching a film before reading a book would make more interest than reading a book at first. To elaborate on my point, a person who does not read a book's film tries to following each episode of a film when it releases. He or she follows each episode without having any information about next seasons or episodes so that it would be exciting for him. In this situation, people would better discussion about the film and predict next seasons; therefore, it is interest for them to following the film. But, if they read a book before watching a film, they have information about events and happens that occurs during a film. In other words, they know about all the film, so it is not interest for them to the following film. They can predict all episodes and seasons. Indeed, when individuals watch a film at first, they can more enjoy a film rather than people reading a book at first.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that books have many characters, so it may confusing for readers. To shed more light on this matter, since books, especially historian books, have a lot of characters, they would make confusing their readers. In this situation, when human see a film before reading a book, they have able to see all characters and actors. In each episode, new characters may add to film or story, so when people see them in a film, they can better analysis them and gain a lot of information about their personalities and factions. As a result, when people want to read a book, they would able to understand a story and it may enjoyable for them.
All in all, considering the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that watching a film before reading a book has many merits points. I believe that seeing a film before reading a book not only makes more exciting for viewers but also makes opportunities for people to know better characters of the film.
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- TPO-46 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- TPO 60 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8018018018 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57046916021 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423423423423 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5890372898 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.523809524 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34497246675 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129230158417 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915802341975 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249825925366 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491775655655 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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