Demand of food is increasing
Food is a one of the basic needs of a human being. Globally, raising food consumption is becoming a topic of grave concern in the upcoming years. This essay deal with the hike in the food consumption reasons and steps to catch the raising food demands along with my opinion.
First of all, the rapid growth in population is main cause of incline in food consumption. As an illustration, according to the senses of 2011, world population growth rate is about 3 percentage and cross the mark of 9 billion by 2030. Secondly, now a days most of the societies are adapting the consumerism culture. This materialistic approach of societies leads to a food wastage. WHO, such as, recently publish a report in which organisation mention that every year near about 1/3 food going into trash.
However, countries are join hands with each other to tackle this problem. However, developed nations are sharing their knowledge and technology with developing countries to raise crop production and low the crop waste. Moreover, farmers are acclimatizing the new methods and techniques to increase production. In addition, scientist are also developing and proposing a hybrid crops and plants of better production rate. Apart from that, governments are launching a campaigns and introducing new law to aware people to cut low the food wastage.
In conclusion, I am saying that the cut the food wastage is necessary as increase the food production.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...he mark of 9 billion by 2030. Secondly, now a days most of the societies are adapting the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06751054852 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87341462357 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8682212404 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.7857142857 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328573649658 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959944278971 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984729376862 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204012383472 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110058453977 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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