You are a student in a college and have not yet completed an important assignment for your course. You are writing a letter to your tutor
Apologize for the delay
Explain why it is late
Request an extension
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter to aplogize the delay which took place. To be honest I am not procrastinator person but the condition caused to change, unfourtunatly I could not compelete an assignment despite being resposible to finish . you have known as a proffessinal teacher so I consider you can help me to pass these course successfuly.
I would like to make clear that my mother was in hospital for two months, also I should protect her because my sister live in another city. She had a strong surgry and I could not hesitat to support her so it was impossible attend class.
I think you will be kind enough to understand my situation and give me an appourtunity to compensate. I demand to extent my time for one week to compelete my course. I hope my request is valid and logical enough to draw your attention. I would appreciate, if you give me a chance.
I am looking forward to answering from you.
Your faithfuly,
Bahare past
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nment despite being resposible to finish . you have known as a proffessinal teache...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...nt despite being resposible to finish . you have known as a proffessinal teacher so...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me for one week to compelete my course. I hope my request is valid and logical en...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... logical enough to draw your attention. I would appreciate, if you give me a chan...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... appreciate, if you give me a chance. I am looking forward to answering from yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62209302326 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83549432488 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68023255814 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9632062182 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2727272727 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215354052356 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734476070229 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325120035725 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106168241074 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541638977673 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.