Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Having the appropriate clothes is an important issue, because they are not just a concealment, but rather a very important part of us in terms of how we choose to be seen in the society and inrtroduce ourselves in the first place. Some people may argue that it is not really important what you are wearing and that your clothes do not affect your behavior and they don’t define you and that there are more important things that can represent a person, but in my view, clothes are one of the main factors that influence people’s behaviors, and I am going to explain why.
Firstly, clothes are very important in shaping the first impression.
it is an undisputable fact that clothes play a significant role in hoe people perceive us in the first meeting. Many people spend a lot of time chosing their clothes when it comes to things like job interviews and other types of interviews and meetings in general. Clothes act as a cultural code in this occasions, giving the interviewer or employer a general picture. For example, I was invited to an interview a few months before and I was so busy that I really didn’t have the time to choose a proper clothing, and so I just put on the first thing that my hands grabbed on and as a result during the whole interview I felt so self conscious that I simply couldn’t be on my best and was not satisfied with the result of the interview and I believe I could have done much better. As you can see, that all happened because I didn’t give a proper amount of time to choose my clothing and generally deciding about my appearance.
Seconldy, clothes have a hige impact in shaping one’s self esteem. By choosing to wear the right and appropriate clothes for whatever situation in our daily lives, be it at work or school or a friendly meeting or simply at home, we are infact giving ourselves value and taking care of our selves. And if we dom’t pay attention to what we wear and how we look just because there are more importat things to do, we are actually depriving ourselves from a boost in self confidence. For instance, I live alone, and I know just how important it is to have the appropriate clothes on eventhough you are alone, and I can see vividly how my clothes affect my overall mood and performance in even the simplest daily tasks that I have to do.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that clothes can deeply influence our behavior and actions, and it is important to give a proper amount of time and care to pic them. Not only they play a big part in ourfirst impressions and introducig us, but also for the sake of our own confidence and self esteem and the ability to perform well in any task before us and not having to feel self conscious about how we look all the time. I believe that it is a good idea that people should give their choice of clothings more attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, as a result, in my view, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54615384615 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63773748195 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1942745559 48.9658058833 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.6 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 5.45110844103 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133230611544 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520107742508 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487856271937 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803311015171 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499632181202 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 10.002688172 255% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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