students at universities often have a choice of places to live.They may choose to live in university dormitories,or they may choose to live in apartments in the community.compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community.where would you prefer to live?give reasons for your preferences.
In these days,universities have giving a lots of facilities of the students regarding to environment issues than even who would to live them.While others can selecting to live in apartments in the society.But here I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with,first and foremost education plays a vital role in human being life that 's why they might curios about living in university housing as well as they would help for their future but also there have several reasons behind this because who can follow the rules of university as far as they always punctual relate to any work nor students should maintain the discipline each to other works such as study,sports,work places neither they can live in university housing they could not facing the traffic problem.so,it is very superb influences of the students life.Thus,
who would awareness about the rules Rather than universities change and they always update knowledge regarding any new rules of university housing.
Moving towards,there are plethora students living in apartment in the community.After that,sometimes students can face the traffic on the road either they could not attending the full lecture and so it is very bad effect for students life.Moreover,they would handle the matters.Althrough the pollution.The pollution causing umpteen disease like as .blood pressure, cancer,anxiety,heart,low pressure and so many
other much.I think that students might living apartment in the citizen.Furthermore,they would good communicate one to other person whereas it is better point students living in the apartment. lastly,universities and apartment living one differences between for the girls.The human trafficking it is so common in any nations that 's why I suggest the universities housing living in the best option for girls.
All said and done,I reckon in my opinion universities housing it would good benefits for any students compare to the apartment living house.Thus,student can determined in any works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, while, i reckon, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54045307443 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5873607589 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550161812298 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.557598842 49.4020404114 453% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 342.4 106.682146367 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.8 20.7667163134 298% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.8 7.06120827912 465% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397040619834 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236071265925 0.084324248473 280% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034434173235 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215430499017 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076603046068 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 13.0946893788 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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