You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Thanks your friend for the holiday
-Explain that you left your wallet in their house
-give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Anna,
I am writing this letter to say thanks for spending holidays with me and make it remarkable. However, I can still feel the aroma from your kitchen and lip-smacking food made by aunt Jenney. Nevertheless, Aunty is a great cook.
After reaching home I realized and identified that I left my wallet somewhere in your house which containing crucial documents along with money.
Let me give you an instruction so that you can find it easily and return it back as soon as possible. Teal green color wallet has a logo of bird on bottom right side of it with yellow border. Day before yesterday, when we were playing with playstation that time I kept my wallet within the second level drawer just below of your playstaion. Hope this will help you. My dad will be travelling to your near by location with in couple of days i.e. Wednesday due to few official works. It would be better if you could hand over the wallet to my father.
Thanks for inviting me and turning the entire summer holiday memorable. It will hold the space of my mind forever.
Thanks
Sharmistha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 401, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... you. My dad will be travelling to your near by location with in couple of days i.e. We...
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Line 13, column 460, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...th in couple of days i.e. Wednesday due to few official works. It would be better ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46810711566 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708333333333 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1313382015 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337606099737 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919335281952 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575952430065 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163699970459 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778109239462 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.