Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
Having plenty of money is the key to happiness is told by a few. However, there are many other things that money can never buy, such as lovable family and friends with whom we enjoy every step of life.
Firstly, abundant money makes you rich, buys a luxurious house, owns a dream car, helps you choose your favorite food all the time, furnishes with lavish furniture, gets to wear designer clothing and matching accessories and sometimes the education in a desiring college etc. In addition, money can get us Visa to travel to any part of the globe and complete expenditure for a dream destination wedding celebration. All the hard work in our everyday life is to finally earn enough to fulfill our basic needs for a living. You are either a king or a beggar, based on the wealth you possess.
Secondly, saying all that money can buy, it can never buy health. Health is wealth. For example, A well-known wealthiest person we know, Steve Jobs, the CEO of Apple Inc., died due to pancreatic cancer. Even though, he could afford all the medical cost and had the luxury to choose medical expertise, money could not help him out fight cancer. Furthermore, money can only buy materialistic assets but cannot replace loving family and friends. Because, in life's journey people are remembered for what they could do to the society with what they had, rather than how much money they had when they leave us forever.
In conclusion, lovable people with us in life is the biggest blessing. Although, we need money to carry out our life, it is not the ultimate. Money in moderation and love in abundance is what we all need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68070175439 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43145489671 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.608351391 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248833206773 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791136507379 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637819008506 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159144454265 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619622262002 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.