Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son.
Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.
Dear Sir/Madam,
In this letter, I would like to ask you whether my son, John, could study at your school. My family moved into Almaty city a week ago, on October 7. We have not decided about what school our son will study at.
My son is a fourteen-year-old boy. His performance in both mathematics and physics are outstanding. The former teacher in maths used to say that he could find a solution to complicated equations both faster and correctly than anyone else in the class. His classmates also would address to him to help them with the formulas and laws of physics. However, he does not seem to be interested in languages and literature. We uselessly have tried to motivate him to study these disciplines.
His favorite hobby is to play football. He always ready to participate in any championship as a defender. Nevertheless, he has a wasteful pastime. He plays video games for many hours. You might think that we are too permissive parents. In my opinion, he develops social skills, while he is taking part in the communication with other children from different countries.
My household would be grateful, if you as the Principal allow my child to continue his eduction at your school. You could either send me a message to my email address “tolikfdfxxx@mail.ru” or phone on the following phone number 87001444413.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05652173913 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36910515793 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4322433138 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6111111111 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7777777778 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141841693945 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431936098011 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545795807282 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840465052324 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734807641754 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.