You heard there is a job to guide tourists in your town for a travel company.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
• How (where) you heard about this job.
• Why you think you are suitable for this job.
• Ask some questions about this job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Harry Martin, a resident of Greenwich Avenue. Today morning, I read in local newspaper about a vacancy of tour-guide in your travel company. I have keen interest in this job offer and writing this letter about the same.
I have done bachelor degree course in Mass media and along with that I have a certificate of travel and tourism training course. I had worked with Tripadvisor for last five years and due to my relocation to this new city I quit my job. I am a proficient English speaker and additionally I am a fluent mandarin speaker which is a pre-requisite for this job. I think my educational background, work-experience and foreign language skill makes me well deserving candidate for this job.
It would be really appreciated, if you clear few of my doubts related to the job offer, firstly, I wanted to ask that is food and stay provided by organisation in case of multi-days tours. Will I get extra pay for extra working hours.
For your reference,I have enclosed a copy of my résumé with this letter. I hope you will find me an aspirant candidate for this work. Looking forward for a positive revert from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Harry Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Harry Martin, a resident of Greenwi...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
...Martin, a resident of Greenwich Avenue. Today morning, I read in local newspaper about a vaca...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of travel and tourism training course. I had worked with Tripadvisor for last fi...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ocation to this new city I quit my job. I am a proficient English speaker and add...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which is a pre-requisite for this job. I think my educational background, work-e...
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Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... well deserving candidate for this job. It would be really appreciated, if you c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... working hours. For your reference,I have enclosed a copy of my résumé with ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ert from you soon. Yours Sincerely Harry Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80095545733 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1547807227 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9230769231 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394722970514 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125544361332 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772030493554 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226390921631 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657251076499 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.