Jane Austen (1775-1817) is one of the most famous of all English novelists, and today her novels are more popular than ever, with several recently adapted as Hollywood movies. But we do not have many records of what she looked like. For a long time, the only accepted image of Austen was an amateur sketch of an adult Austen made by her sister Cassandra. However recently a professionally painted, full-length portrait of a teenage girl owned by a member of the Austen family has come up for sale. Although the professional painting is not titled Jane Austen, there are good reasons to believe she is the subject.
The reading and the lecture are both about Jane Austen who is a famous English novelist and many Hollywood movies are based on her novel. The author feels that the full-length portray that came up for sale is a real image of the teenage Jane Austen. The lecturer challenged the claim made by the author. He claims that the linked between the extended family and Jane is not convincing and connection to the extended family hardy prove that Jane Austen was a teenager.
To begin with, the argues that after the death of the Austen, her family gave permission to portrait the picture. The article also mentions that now the Austen family recognize that it is the young Jane. The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He states that Jane Austen was dead for 70 years ago and recent family member never saw her. Additionally, he says that how her family actually identify her as a Jane Austen.
Secondly, the writer suggests that the portrait is closest to the Cassandra face who is Jane Austen sister and also elaborates that with the same nose, eyes, mouth and same shape. However, the lecturer rebuts this by mentioning that Jane Austen extended family is large. Thus, it is possible that the image is the other teenage girls of the family with the same face structure.
Thirdly, the author posits that Ozias Humphrey who was a professional painter and was active in the same period when Jane Austen was teenage. He also adds that may be Jane Austen family hired him for the paint. In contrast, the lecturer position is that William did not sell the canvas in London when Jane Austen was a teenager. The evidence showed that William started selling the canvas when Auten was 27 years old. Which clearly noted that the girl must be older than the portrait.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... real image of the teenage Jane Austen. The lecturer challenged the claim made by t...
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Line 1, column 430, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proof' (noun) instead of prove (verb)?
Suggestion: proof
...connection to the extended family hardy prove that Jane Austen was a teenager. T...
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Line 13, column 419, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the canvas when Auten was 27 years old. Which clearly noted that the girl must be old...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 12.0772626932 207% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74516129032 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25234529174 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3416346802 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5294117647 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167817344301 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619581186279 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503306766926 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112114528979 0.162205337803 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040894056603 0.0443174109184 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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