Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the past, most off the parents did not know that what is their kids field or major and this matter is not too important to them. I am totally agree with this situation that there is more involvement between parents and children' s education.
In my opinion first reason might be reduced the amount of children per parents. Nowadays it does matter how many kids you have because of some issues like economic situation is different with past, kids does not consider as workers. this reasons lead to fewer children and with fewer children importance of each raised up, so, parents would take more care about their children not only in educational fields, but another fields also.
another important things that impress the amount of educational' s involvement is parent' s information. In the past parents did not know about education or any major of study, however, today parents become more informational about the knowledge and encourage their kids to improve themselves by educational progress because now they are know how does human increase ability by its knowledge so, they involved in their children's studies, moreover, children' s futures.
another reason that riced in my mind is that past parents do not have enough time or if they had it they did not have access to their kid' study. there were no internet and follow of this there were no online information about their kids, however, today parents can easily access to students information about grades, teachers, courses, and whatever exist in educational system.
For wrapping up this condition is so helpful for the students to progress themselves by their parent' involvement and have to appreciate this situation that parents did not have when they were a kid.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
...not too important to them. I am totally agree with this situation that there is more ...
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Suggestion: This
...ast, kids does not consider as workers. this reasons lead to fewer children and with...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... educational fields, but another fields also. another important things that imp...
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Suggestion: Another
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ucational progress because now they are know how does human increase ability by its ...
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Suggestion: Another
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Suggestion: There
...did not have access to their kid study. there were no internet and follow of this the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 289.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03806228374 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54945222756 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515570934256 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2859502082 49.2860985944 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.6 110.228320801 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 21.698381199 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330277166661 0.272083759551 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144407564841 0.0996497079465 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573414332812 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199901581789 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379872136413 0.0443174109184 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.