Tpo 27- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Todays society faces to employing problem and it does not any matter what kinds of job founded. so, it is not important the job that people find is satisfying or not. personally, I believe if the job was not satisfying it would really hard to do it every day and will kill the person, not physically, but mentally. because of three reasons; your job is your life, not enough time to live, money not first of all and the end of.
How do you feel if you have to do meaningless job or career everyday? Cleary it would be awful. it is like damage yourself with knife little by little. it would kill people in their mind not physics and society would be like just zombies. I had to do some unlike job for 1 years then find out it was effect on me in badly way so I tried to do something instead of that job.
is there infinite time to live for human? Of course there is not. so why do not live on the way that we like. Not only you enjoy your life, but it encourage another to follow your route also.
The third one is that money is not all the things. I think in the way that if people do their enjoyable job, although with low income, they will reach to more money in that field that they like and does not need to kill themselves for earning more in bad way.
In concluding I explain my opinion that satisfying work is more important than just a job because of shortness lifetime, damage to people's mind, that money could earn in your favorite field.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-28 | supergirl20 | 60 | view |
| 2020-01-28 | supergirl20 | 60 | view |
| 2020-01-22 | SSN775 | 76 | view |
| 2020-01-22 | Somayya | 70 | view |
| 2020-01-22 | SSN775 | 76 | view |
- TPO 30 Integrated WritingA little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a “burning mirror”: a polished copper 83
- TPO 30 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.Use specific reasons and examples t 60
- TPO 27 integrated writing : Little Ice Age 70
- tpo 28 writing 3
- TPO 28- Robert E. Peary was a well-known adventurer and arctic explorer who in 1909 set out to reach the North Pole. When he returned from the expedition, he claimed to have reached the pole on April 7, 1909. This report made him into an international cel 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Todays society faces to employing proble...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...t any matter what kinds of job founded. so, it is not important the job that peopl...
^^
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... not important the job that people find is satisfying or not. personally, I believe if the jo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
... that people find is satisfying or not. personally, I believe if the job was not satisfyin...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...r not. personally, I believe if the job was not satisfying it would really hard to do it every day...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...e person, not physically, but mentally. because of three reasons; your job is your life...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oney not first of all and the end of. How do you feel if you have to do meanin...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ou have to do meaningless job or career everyday? Cleary it would be awful. it is like d...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...eer everyday? Cleary it would be awful. it is like damage yourself with knife litt...
^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e yourself with knife little by little. it would kill people in their mind not phy...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to do something instead of that job. is there infinite time to live for human...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...o something instead of that job. is there infinite time to live for human? ...
^^
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...live for human? Of course there is not. so why do not live on the way that we like...
^^
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
Suggestion: encourages
...e. Not only you enjoy your life, but it encourage another to follow your route also. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... encourage another to follow your route also. The third one is that money is...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e another to follow your route also. The third one is that money is not all t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emselves for earning more in bad way. In concluding I explain my opinion that ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ecause of shortness lifetime, damage to peoples mind, that money could earn in your fav...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, then, third, i think, of course, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20357142857 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17269406263 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0239747126 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5625 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281070789113 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849683273683 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603342589829 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151226805399 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672722586204 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.