Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
As we know, the growth of children will affect their personality in the future. Nowadays, many families immigrate in a big city because they want their children to have a good conditional to be an adult. I don’t agree with this statement. The children ought to become of age in the countryside because of the life skills and connecting with nature.
To begin with, it is believed that soft skills are vital to young people. Even though they have a treasure of knowledge, they can’t deal with problems without traditional skills. However, the children in the countryside can find a solution by experience every day. On the other hand, living in a big city will make them lose a chance to go outside and learn how to solve some difficulty in society. A significant example is that rural has someplace such as field, lake…where children can play together. So they can learn how to survive if they lost in the juggle. Unlike the countryside, the city just has towers and buildings so that children can only play indoor instead of outdoor. Therefore, parents had better choose the countryside to live whether children can acquire traditional skills.
Another reason I disagree is getting closer to nature. The hustle and bustle in the city make them lose an opportunity to go sight-seeing. They will never experience the breathtaking views of nature. They just see those views on YouTube by their smartphones and computer. Although the village doesn’t have modern gadgets, they live in a place surrounded by trees, mountains…For instance, the children in the countryside often spend their time climbing trees to take fruits. They don’t depend on smartphones like children in the city.
Conclusion, living in the countryside is a good place for children to grow up completely. That’s why some wealthy family move to the countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08496732026 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90933563579 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8337820485 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187769086417 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564772563285 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575023630931 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131761756385 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544214150887 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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