Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
It is argued that many working people get less or no exercise either during working days or during their free time and this cause health problem. I am totally agree with this view. In below essay I will discuss the reasons for this and discusses some remedies for this problem.
Now a day life is very fast and everybody is in the race to beat other. We are just running behind money and everyone is try to earn more and more and progress in his life. In the race for money and promotion we forget our self and giving least care to our self. In this fast life we are not getting any time for exercise and workout. Lack of exercise leads to a lot of life threatening diseases.
Some jobs require to work late hours and this is also a major cause of unhealthy life. Some people work till late night as they told to do this to keep the jobs. However, after working very hard for whole week people feel very tired and want to rest on the weekend and during their free time. These days fast growing technology is also making us lazy as most of the people addicted to social media and spend most of their free time on Facebook for Tweeter.
In my view, people should change their life style and try to do some exercise or workout in free time instead of spending all the time on social media. Moreover, people should engage in any sports or physical activity even though it is only for the weekend. This will help to eliminate lot of factors which lead towards diseases because of unhealthy life style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...this cause health problem. I am totally agree with this view. In below essay I will d...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'giving the least'.
Suggestion: giving the least
...ey and promotion we forget our self and giving least care to our self. In this fast life we ...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...tening diseases. Some jobs require to work late hours and this is also a major cau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41071428571 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02347196064 2.80592935109 72% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539285714286 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7060033232 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341056125523 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11518853346 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151772185063 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218063811814 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137482146016 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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