You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it.
Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express:
why you went to the shop/office
how the employees behaved to offend you
what you expect the company to do
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to have your attention about the poor services your employees provided for me last week.
On Monday I went to your restaurant to have a lunch and I was unsatisfied with the deneanor of the waiter. I ordered some beefsteak and I would like it to be well done. I have to wait in 30 minutes that they bring me my food without the explaination for my waiting. but the meet was rare and not was well done as I asked before. I required them to make it again but he ignored me and go away.
What was happen on that they make me really fell to be offend and uncomfortable. I want you to take my complaint seriouly and retrain your staff to make sure that this issue will not occure anymore.
I am looking to hearing from you.
your sincerely
Alice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir I am writing this letter to have your at...
^^^^
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have lunch'.
Suggestion: have lunch
... On Monday I went to your restaurant to have a lunch and I was unsatisfied with the deneanor...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ithout the explaination for my waiting. but the meet was rare and not was well done...
^^^
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it again but he ignored me and go away. What was happen on that they make me rea...
^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...he ignored me and go away. What was happen on that they make me really fell to be ...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... I am looking to hearing from you. your sincerely Alice
^^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g to hearing from you. your sincerely Alice
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 638.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25333333333 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38793262514 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6226914892 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158407884259 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589885841795 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774075664216 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126737599571 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826064318612 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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