In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Many improvements are done by the government for agriculture, but unfortunately more number of people in the world are not nourished by food. this might be due to the lack of young farmers and due to the encroachment of agricultural lands. this essay talks about the causes of the problems behind agriculture and the steps to be taken to ameliorate it.
Agriculture is the backbone of some developing countries. Although, the higher officials in the central government strive for the betterment of this profession, younger generation people and the student's emerging out from colleges are attracted towards the information technology jobs. As a result, there is a reduction in the number of people practising agriculture.For example, the survey conducted by Asia's education committee stated that about 99 percent of the government jobs or some other private jobs rather than trying out agricultural practices.
And also, in the modern era, due to the increase in population, most of the agriculture farmlands are converted into residential areas where houses and other apartments are constructed. this might, in the long run, result in the lack of area for cultivating food crops such as rice, wheat and other millets.
The problem of reduction in cultivating crops should be eradicated by taking necessary steps. one such step is to educate the students of this era about the importance of crop cultivation. If more seminars are conducted regarding the adverse effects of the reduction in agriculture, the youngsters might acquire an awareness. Who would provide us with food if all the people are engaged in software jobs?
To conclude, I would suggest the youngsters to choose courses related to agriculture in their varsity and come out with flying colours as a farmer. Though this sounds funny, one should know the grievous consequence of the lack of farmers and argicultural activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29508196721 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06570526587 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2652700362 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191452545465 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066600522702 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539716574822 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108127111492 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081979948602 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.