With the increase of digital media available online, the role of the library has become obsolete. Universities should only procure digital media rather than constantly updating textbooks. Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view.
Its 21st century where our life is totally becomes digital. we are so much dependent on technology for every aspect of life that is why digital media has eliminated the role of library from our life. On web, information about every topic is just a touch apart. But there is plethora of reasons which show benefits of books over the ebooks. In essay below, we will discuss both sides of coins in detail.
To commence with, books play a vital role in our life. It enhances the memory power and vocabulary as well. In a survey in UK 2010, it is concluded that students who read books have more grasping power as compared to the students who read from ebooks. Furthermore, from library, students can get books without paying a panny. So, its beneficial for poor students as well.
Now every coins has two sides, here we flip the side of coin. Information available on web is unlimited . One can find any information related to vast number of topics. But there are some books which are not available for free . some students have to compromise over here. Reading books from web make students couch potato and which leads to rise the health issues like thyroid, obesity etcetera.
To conclude , I would say that there should be restricted usage of ebooks after matriculation only. It will help teenagers to develop good physical health and sharp memory .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02643171806 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63108148716 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647577092511 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1519055758 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790370759099 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309128015904 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381010952858 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455804256953 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424470156495 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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