In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Much of the world places premium on cashless transactions and some do not. We are living in a globalized world in which there is a boom of technology. In this essay, we are going to discuss the merits and demerits of plastic money.

To commence with, People these days are more inclined towards using credit cards. Because it reduces the burdensome of carrying money to do some kind of shopping or any major business deals. Transfer of money from one account to other account is just a swipe away. Furthermore, in case of some kind of exigency for example some sort of medical exigency, when you do not have sufficient cash, plastic money plays an unbeatable role to sort out the situation.

In contrary to this, of course there is flip side of each coin. Today is a tech-savvy world. People who want to earn money with any hook or crook use their skills to hack bank accounts through cloning the credit cards. In addition to this, bank also used to put some hidden charges in the use of credit cards due to which end user has to pay huge amount in return. Besides this plastic money makes one forget its limit to spend in its budget only.

To recapitulate, in my opinion, cashless society is realistic and going further we can see future in plastic money only. But one has to be beware while using credit cards.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, of course, sort of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6512605042 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34446313984 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5579077068 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0714285714 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202674069205 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653822091258 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705129409357 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125399340183 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533925341929 0.0609392437508 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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