The average annual expenditure of college students from three countries.
The table compared the average annual expenditure of college students from three contries in total costs and different living expenses.
Overall, the total expenditure of students in country A was higher than countries B and countries C. In these all countries, students spent a high proportion of their budget in countries B and C.
In the country A, students spent total of 5000 US per year, there were lower than countries B and C with 4500 and 1500, respectively.
Accommodation account for 45% of total budget of students in country A, white the proportion of country B were lower for students in country B, and also just at 30% in country C. However, in term of food, the figure in country C was the highest, at 36% of their total expenditure. Students in country C also spent a high percentage of their budget on book, at 21%, compared with 9% in countries B and at only 3% in country C. Students in countries A and B spent respectively of total costs at 22% and 23% for leisure. Whereas, students in country C spent only 1% on this category, lower than countries A and B with 8% and 5% respectively.
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- Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and give special courses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. 73
- More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newpapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ry A, white the proportion of country B were lower for students in country B, and al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62814070352 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84012525371 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417085427136 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0463707887 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182503296414 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107395731022 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139281398592 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18384634805 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180267909551 0.0819641961636 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.