International visitors to New Zealand: transport used during visit
The bar chart shows the proportions of different means of transport that international holiday-makers use when they visit New Zealand.
Overall, the data indicates that there are five types of transportation that international travelers choose to move but the most popular means of transport is public transport, including:plane, coach, train, boat, accounting for about 90 percent in totally.
We can see that the greatest percentage of transport is private move, which nearly 70 percent of people holiday use car to travel on vacation in New Zealand while plane and coach are used about as much as each other, over 30 percent; however, plane is the vehicle with a higher percentage of use than coach. The fourth most common modes of transport is train, which at 20 percent of visitors use. The transport is used the least compared with the others is boat, which less than 10 percent of tourist like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07333333333 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83195260475 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4994857128 43.030603864 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.2 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352558117185 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197406563445 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092948430282 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250546782758 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949466758681 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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