Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the hectic life of people puts a lot of pressure on society members. In order to be in a healthy rational status we need friends and people to interact with. Although some may argue that making new friends constantly is better, I believe retaining the relationship with longer known friends is more important. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when we keep a relation with our friends for a long period of time, we will find more in common with them. It is crystal clear that we all enjoy spending time with people who have the same interests with us; selecting hobbies and picking an activity during the leisure time is far easier in that case since we enjoy the same activities. For example, I have a friend named Mahdi, we knew each other since elementary school. He was our neighbor, and we maintained our relation for more than 10 years. During this time, we found a lot of hobbies liked by both of us. Going to cinemas and watching the TV shows for instance. Since we knew we had the same taste in having fun, we always went to cinemas together, and spending time with each other was extremely delightful for us. As you can see, because me and Mahdi had the same interests in common, spending time with each other were making us really happy.
Moreover, retaining a relationship with friends for a long period of time induces deeper bonds of friendship. According to the psychological scientists, when we spend a considerable amount of time with a person, despite their gender, we get emotionally tied to them, and unintentionally, we feel close to that person. Needless to say, we all enjoy spending time with someone who we feel close to. My own experience demonstrates this. During the high school, there was a classmate who helped me to solve my math problems, later on we kept our relationship even farther in the university. He didn't feel like only a friend to me anymore. He was more like a brother and a family member to me. Whenever I see him, I get really happy and excited. Something that doesn't happen when I greet my new friends. And that's Simply because we kept our relationship for quite a lot of years. Therefore, I believe retaining the friendship with older friends will result in tightening the relationship bonds, and this makes spending time together enjoyable.
In sum, I strongly believe that keeping our old friends is far better than making new friends every day. We not only find a lot in common with our older friends, but we also form profound relation with them. The mentioned reasons will make spending time with older friends more delightful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ship even farther in the university. He didnt feel like only a friend to me anymore. ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...eally happy and excited. Something that doesnt happen when I greet my new friends. And...
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...happen when I greet my new friends. And thats Simply because we kept our relationship...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72553191489 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59917892806 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497872340426 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.704907596 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4230769231 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259668980059 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819566583285 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668012914387 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188522104246 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240927145851 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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