On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item.
Write a letter to the insurance manager.
In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one of your travel insurance customers and my name is Damla Uygur. I am writing to inform you about the necklace that I have lost during my trip to Italy.
Last week, I went to Italy to join some meetings for my company and I stayed at the Green Hotel for a week. Wednesday, I wore my gold necklace which has three little points of brilliants. After I finished the meetings, I went to the hotel’s beach to swim. When I realized that I had the necklace, I took it out and put it into my bag. I have not checked my bags till now, unfortunately, the necklace is not in the bag. I think it drops into the sand.
Before writing to you, I called the hotel to ask if they found a necklace, but they told me they did not find anything. I am sending you a picture of me with the necklace and the bill for it. I would be grateful if you could pay me the full amount. For any further information, you can call me.
Best regards,
Damla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am the one of...
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am the one of your travel insurance cu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... I have lost during my trip to italy. Last week, I went to italy to join some ...
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Line 11, column 428, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'drops'?
Suggestion: drops
...necklace are not in the bag. I think it drop into the sand. Before writing to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bag. I think it drop into the sand. Before writing to you, I called the hote...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... further information you can call me. Best regards, Damla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18617021277 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36550872065 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7418360506 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5384615385 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147385357809 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478633499381 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505270198252 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109101712667 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705136100822 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.